August 11,2010

Hi Everybody,

It's been awhile. I have been busy with my daughter and new grandbaby. A good friend calls her grandchildren BOMBIES, an acronym for "babies of my babies." They are surely something special.

So now, back to my other baby--Broccoli. I have been doing something, mostly revising, revising and more revising. Sorry, those of you who don't want to revise anything more than once-the truth is, most writers spend more time revising than the writing the first draft. The first part of Broccoli needs the most work, since I really didn't know what I was doing in the beginning. I did have an outline tho, which functioned more like a flashlight than a road map since I altered it profusely.

The first place I sent my manuscript to was the Delacourt Contest. (run by Random House) for a first young adult novel. It didn’t win, but it lasted until the end of May, which is when I got the rejection notice. So then I revised the manuscript some more, and sent it to Clarion, which my research indicated would be a good choice.

They have published books by authors I admire like Katherine Paterson. They also publish historical fiction, which Broccoli is, since it takes place in Thompson, Ct. during the 2000-1001 school year.

A bit about the history:
The school system in Thompson is unusual, since the elementary, middle and high schools are all under one roof. The high school is a grand structure more than a century old, originally built and donated by the Tourtellotte family—more about this later.

If you are interested in the history, check out these sites:
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Thompson,_Connecticut
http://www.connecticutgenealogy.com/windham/thompson.htm
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tourtellotte_Memorial_High_School
http://www.thompsonpublicschools.org/TMHSAA/newsletters_09/December.pdf
http://www.thompsonpublicschools.org/TMHSAA/newsletters_08/October.pdf

http://www.thompsonhistorical.org/Newsletters/2002_Summer.PDF

If you are in the area, the high school has a "Tourtellotte Memorial Room" which is a mini-museum and open to the public:


Tourtellotte Memorial Room
785 Riverside Drive, Route 12
Thompson, CT
Phone: 860-923-9303

Open: 2-4 pm, 1st Sunday of each month

An exhibit of 19th century antiques and furniture belonging to the Tourtellotte family. Located in Tourtellotte Memorial High School. Free admission.


July 1, 2010

Eighth grader Suzanna Cruz, the main character in my story, has to eat broccoli for breakfast. Not your typical wake-up food. Why does she do this? Only her author knows, so it will have to remain a secret until the book find a publishing home!

I was amazed at the healthful qualities of broccoli. I knew it was good for you, but I was so impressed as I did my book research that I went out and brought some broccoli extract. What do you know? An author can learn things from their own manuscript (it will become a "book" only when it is published.)

I have a confession: I am not much of a veggie eater, but since I want to be healthy, I try. I certainly do not wake up in the morning dreaming of broccoli juice.

So I have decided that part of this blog will be devoted to keeping healthy. After all, none of us will be able to sing or write or do the other things we want to do if we don’t feel well enough to do it.

So lift up your glass of broccoli juice. I actually made it. I added some pineapple to make it a little sweet though. I'm all about SWEET.

To life! Salud!

July 3,2010

Since I began writing this book in 2000-omgosh….a decade ago…probably longer than some of you have been alive-a number of broccoli breakfast recipe sites have popped up. I couldn’t believe it. Who besides Suzanna eats broccoli for breakfast? I’m not counting the tiny amount that might be in an omelet.
Here are some that you might find interesting:

http://www.recipezaar.com/recipe/Broccoli-souffle-Breakfast-Burritos-95858

http://www.grouprecipes.com/76513/cheesy-broccoli-breakfast-casserole.html

http://www.ifood.tv/recipe/buckwheat_broccoli

I haven’t tried any of these but that last one intrigues me. My daughter and I joined a local organic farm share program, and so we have been trying to eat more greens. It’s hard for me...

August 10,2010


Besides the broccoli factor, writing the book has reminded me that it takes a team to get anything of value accomplished. Suzanna has talent and perseverance, but other people have to get involved to make her endeavors a success. One agent I queried asked: why did you write this book? This is what I answered:

I wrote Broccoli for Breakfast because I felt my students needed more fiction books about music, healthy eating and dealing with divorce. Personally, I wanted to show young people that parental problems are never their fault and that parents who divorce each other still love their children. I also wanted to show that optimism and persistence will overcome hardships, not only through the art of creative detouring but by faith. Miracles happen when others join in; that is what makes the Thompson Middle School production of The Music Man a reality. Finally, I wanted to show that love means letting others make their own choices, even when those choices are frightening. Suzanna has to let “her perfect family” evolve. When she does, she is able to let go of her terror and sing a rousing rendition of the Star Spangled Banner at her eighth grade graduation ceremony. On all of these levels she learns that love has the power to cast out fear, and putting that knowledge into action sets her free.

I can’t wait until you get to read this book!